100 words by Melissa

                                THE DAY I BECAME FAMOUS

Every day it got bigger. My mum always tells me ‘the bigger the better’ and this was completely true. It was never seen by anyone, but the artist and I don’t have a clue how this happened! Anyway I still dream about it in my sleep, every night I picture it 10 feet tall looking down on everybody it would be amazing! All I knew was that it was made out of scrap metal. It was soon revealed and a photographer had me interviewed. And that’s how I ended up being famous over the world!

7 thoughts on “100 words by Melissa

  1. It was really fun writing that a bit of a challenge though! :-0

  2. Wow that is well good Melissa u should be proud I like the way you changed the writing well done dude

  3. Melissa,
    I like the way you begin the story in the moment leaving the reader hooked! I like how you’ve used a direct quote in your 100WC. Keep up the nice work. (English Teacher, Ocean City, NJ, USA)

  4. Great 100WC Melissa, good use of punctuation and sentence lengths, liked how you started with a short sentence it made you wonder what was getting bigger. Keep up the good work 🙂

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