5 sentences by Hannah

It was a dark,cold night. A  storm (they knew) was coming. A storm they never knew, never knew it would happen. The river banks burst. This weather made people very unhappy.

3 thoughts on “5 sentences by Hannah

  1. These sentences are the beginning of a really interesting story I think Hannah. I would love to know what else happens. Perhaps you could continue it sometime. Thank you for writing for 5SC

  2. Awesome 5 sentences I love it KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK xxx

  3. That’s brill Hannah I like it how you used a short sentence ‘the river banks burst’.

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