My Story – A Swish of Blue

I am making a story called ‘A Swish of Blue’ and I would like to know if you like it! Please comment.

A Swish Of Blue

On a dark and windy night an alone fisherman, Jeremy Windsnap, caught his final fish and started to head home. But before he could reach the Port he saw a swish of a dazzling blue underneath his small boat. At first he thought it was a big fish, but then he realized that no fish he knew was that shade of sapphire! He decided just to forget about it and head home. When he was tucked in bed he had a terrible nightmare, it was about the blue he saw. In his dream he saw a blue, fuzzy figure jumping out at him and tipping over his boat. He woke in the middle of the night covered in sweat and breathing rapidly!