100 word challange

One day I was walking down the empty streets of Davyhulme and I saw my friend Mohammed. He was walking his pet tourtoise,Bobby, and he said, “Hey Ole! Where are you going?”
“I am going to the park do you want to come?”Yeah that sounds cool” I,saw his Dad waved and said hi.Mohammed said a joke and it was so funny,he was wearing his orange football trainers they cost alot of money!!!as we walked down the pavement to the park,finaly we arrived at the park .

2 thoughts on “100 word challange

  1. Great 100wc ole just want your speech marks in some places keep up the good work

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