100 word challenge by Mia

All i saw was two red eyes. Where did they come from? Why were they here? Who knows that’s when a shadowy dark figure stepped out of the darkness and whispered come with my i was to frightened to object i walked little steps teeth chattering “What will you do to me?” I asked “nothing i just want you to suffer,” it answered when i tried to open my eyes i couldn’t death was the answer death… I finally came to my senses and got up i wasn’t dead thankfully the red eyes were staring at me intently.

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  1. Hi Mia,
    I love your use of questions at the beginning of your writing, they immediately make your writing mysterious and a little scary. You’ve used some great vocabulary which makes your writing more powerful. Don’t forget that I should always be written with a capital letter.
    A great 100 Word Challenge, well done!
    Mrs Stones

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