Run for my life forest

What is that? It was dark alone scary nothing to do no food drink I came to a forest there something there I don’t know what it is I don’t know what to do all know there is more of them I’m to scared I don’t know where I am it looks like I’m in the middle of nowhere I don’t know which way to go I just don’t know . I can hear something it’s like animal footsteps  it might be them again I didn’t like them they were scary I need to go away but which way should I go there surrounding me.

One thought on “Run for my life forest

  1. Hi Ben,

    You’ve created some great suspense in your story. I was left wondering what it was that was following you.

    Think about including some commas to break up your sentences a bit.

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