A great piece of writing by Rhiannon in Year 5

Suddenly, I  appeared in a mysterious forest! It was black and only black! Where was I? I missed my family more than this silly forest! Seconds later,  I saw something. I wasn’t on my own! Quickly, I tried to run but I couldn’t  move as I was shaking from head to toe! Tired, horrified and speechless, I turned my head towards the trees. All I could see were two, red eyes…

One thought on “A great piece of writing by Rhiannon in Year 5

  1. Well done!
    This is a piece of excellent writing!
    Target:Try add more detail and set the scene

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