Rachel in Year 5 knows how to grab the reader’s attention!

Mysteriously, the door of the old, deserted attic creaked open…My blood turned to ice. Quickly, I sneaked into the dusty, dark room. Bang! Something fell over – was someone there? I had to find out! Cautiously, I edged closer into the shadows, the light flickered. Something or someone was there! Terrified, I stole a glance across the room and immediately wished that I hadn’t… All I could see were two, red eyes!