The Big, Bad Wolf by Daniel in Year 2.

The Big, Bad wolf is a crafty, sly creature. He lives in the soul of the forest.

The Big, Bad Wolf has a big, bushy tail like a brush. He also has  a tongue like a water fall and he has BIG secrets! This creature has beady, glowing eyes like search lights. He is very muscular and has a sharp, sensitive ears.  The wolf has claws like needles and he likes to eat little girls! He is  a very greedy, bloodthirsty creature!

Well done Daniel! I really enjoyed reading your super description. You have used some excellent adjectives and similes. Keep up the good work. Miss Brookes.