100 Word Challenge – ‘all I could see were two red eyes…’

By Alexander, Year 6.
Help me! Whoever is reading this piece of miniature text must save me! I’m locked in a colossal, spiky castle with monsters I tell you! I was jogging through a mist before everything went black! All I could see were two red eyes glaring stubbornly at me! Shocked, frightened, exhausted, I knew at that moment I couldn’t escape a ghastly fate! In a nano second, I was chained in a roon, wires scouring my body, a storm was brewing then…The blast of lightening flung down my eardrums and it all went silent! I feel…no..I’m doomed…please…No!