100 Word Challenge – Miss Brookes decided to have a go!

Heart pounding, I prepared to face my doom! Why had I not listened? All hope was lost. If only I hadn’t come here…Seconds later, the fog engulfed me like a suffocating blanket. I knew the end was near. Slowly, the blood, red sun sank into the ground and darkness enveloped me. I took one last gasp of air, swallowed hard and peered into the shadows. The faint sound of breathing shattered the silence. My blood turned to ice as I realised that it wasn’t MY breathing I could hear! I wasn’t alone! All I could see were two red eyes…

4 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge – Miss Brookes decided to have a go!

  1. Great 100 word challege Miss Brookes! I loved the ellipsis at the end of the sentence!

  2. I like the fact you’ve ended with an alipsise and your scary ending miss brookes!

  3. Well Done Miss Brookes!! Great 100 word challenge. I loved it!!

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