y6 homework by robin

It was  my birthday I opened all my presents, one of them was a xbox another was a jigsaw and my best one was a remote control car but it had no batteries .my mum said its time for dinner so I sat down . I had a tuna sandwich yummy!  when I finished I went and got a screwdriver to unscrew the screw .When I finished I got two batteries but when I put the batteries in the remote control car It blew up BANG !!! . I started to cry I said to myself my best birthday present has blown up.