100 word challenge

I was walking on the street alone. Suddenly I tripped over a bin ! I hurt my arm which , was damaged , . Suddenly the pain In my arm stung and was hurt. worried , scared , damaged I rushed to my house . My arm was burning like the sun . When I got home my mum phoned a ambulance . When I got to Trafford general I said ” I hurt my arm by tripping over a bin .” The doctor Said it was a awful cut . When I got back home  I wearing a sling. Now I should look for bins so I don’t Trip  over them  . I just really want to go to bed.

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  1. This is a great 100WC James! I really liked the simile that you used, ‘burning like the sun’. Also, your list of emotions that your character was feeling is great! You’ve included a good mixture of sentences too. Well done, keep up the good work!

    Kayleigh (Team 100WC)

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