100 word challenge

I couldn’t find it! I had travelled half way around the world for nothing! Well I did see some amazing things like the Tokyo Tower and the Empire State Building, but I am really annoyed. Ahhh here I am home, Manchester. Wait. He will be soooooo mad. What should I do? I can hear his voice in my head. His low voice shouting at me… I have got to find it. Whats that on the floor? A box with pink ribbon? A present? For me?! I am going to open it!… The key I’ve found it the key to the…

 

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  1. Oh I like this, it draws myself as a reader into your 100 word challenge. I’m now wondering what’s inside the box 🙂
    Well done and keep up the good work 🙂

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