100 word challenge by Caitlin5B

I could not feel a bit worse. Suddenly the pain in my arm increased! Mum, who was bickering with Dad at the time, looked down. She ran over to me and started calling the ambulance. I screamed a long,painful,horrible scream. It literally felt like I had just been ran over. I had not ever felt worse. Half an hour later, I was in hospital. I had finally woken up. I was still in excruciating pain. It couldn’t stop. It wouldn’t stop. I was so scared. I had never been so much pain in my whole life. Had I? I know that I haven’t     I would know

2 thoughts on “100 word challenge by Caitlin5B

  1. I wonder what had happened to put you into such a painful situation? I love writing where the reader is left with unanswered questions because you then have to start using your imagination. You told the story well and left me wanting more. Well done!

  2. sorry its meant to say I had never been through so much pain in my life

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