100 word challenge by Hannah

On Thursday climbed up a tree. I climbed extremely high! The tree,which seemed easy to climb, was proving me wrong. After I eventually climbed to the top I started down work my way back down. I was calm until I looked down and allow a sudden I fell. I fell like a rocket! SUDDENLY THE PAIN IN MY ARM began to hurt. It hurt for a few days. my mum Said to not climb that tree again. I still climb trees. I love to climb but I wear trainers not the crocs I was wearing. I am all better now and happy.

2 thoughts on “100 word challenge by Hannah

  1. Hannah,
    Love that simile, “I fell like a rocket.” There is nice sentence variety in your 100WC piece that makes for a more enjoyable read. Keep up the great writing! (English Teacher, Ocean City, NJ, USA)

  2. Hannah,
    “I fell like a rocket.” I like that simile! There is some sentence variety in your 100WC that makes for an enjoyable read. Keep up the good writing. (English Teacher, Ocean City, NJ, USA)

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