100 word challenge by Idris

I slipped, suddenly the pain in my arm. I slipped of a really old tree!!! The tree was so decrepit I slipt of it. Briskly my mum and dad came too call the ambulance. In about 10 minutes the ambulance they put me into the back of the van. I was in so much pain I could hardly move my arm I was in so much pain I think I have broke my arm. The pain started getting really worser. When I got there the doctor put a bandage on me. The doctor told me that I have broke my arm. So I couldn’t play anymore.

3 thoughts on “100 word challenge by Idris

  1. This is amazing! I love all the really high level description! The only thing is watch out on your grammar. Apart from that great story Idris. Keep up the great work!

    Harriet M

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