An Adventure

Out of the blue I gazed in wonder  knowing when I would return! Worried, terrified, concerned, I was stuck on the bewildered Island.The next day I built a raft but then I saw a pair of illuminious eyes blazing in the warm, toasty sun.

It was a courageoes animal with razer sharp teeth, claws as long as fingers and a tail as soft as velvet. It was a tiger I gave him some fresh food from the tall trees above when it was sundown we went me and him to a world named Atlantis!!! When we got there I couldn’t believe my eyes!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

4 thoughts on “An Adventure

  1. Ionie, your writing is very atmospheric, with all of the description to draw in your reader. You have hooked me and I really want to know what would happen next. Keep up the great writing!

  2. great staory it was veary descriptive,it would cool to find out what happend next.
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    leon

  3. well done ionie I loved the 3ed sentence really described it all to us and you started in the middle of the story I loved it you must tell us what happens next!!!!!

  4. Cool story, very descriptive. I would love to find out what happens next.

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