Mysterious mythical key (100 wc)

Abandoned and lonely the boy walked and walked until he got to the middle of knowere.He literally had no shoes or socks o. His feet he could of walked for miles and miles but something caught the corner of his eye.it was quite far away , but very shiny the boy ran over to it .Its a key not a normal key an unusuall sized key so he took it to his home on the streets.wait this must be somebodys key i have to return it to were it was found .So the boy walked back and waited wich felt forever  And ever.

6 thoughts on “Mysterious mythical key (100 wc)

  1. Well done Megan. You have created a wonderful build up, you set the scene well by describing the boy and his clothes, I really felt sorry for him. Check the full stops are in the correct place. Take a breath after each one, if it sounds right, leave it there, if not, then just take it out.
    You have made me wonder what the boy was escaping from.
    Look forward to reading more of your writing Megan.

    Mrs Overton
    Head Teacher in North Tyneside, UK
    Team 100WC

  2. I LOVED THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED IT AND YOUR PUNCTUATION WAS BRILLIANT.

  3. Well done Megan, I thought your story was very imaginative. Keep up the hard work!

  4. wow- Megan this is a great piece of work. you should be really really proud of it!

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