Paarrnkaaiiick!!!

Mum flipped the pancake, but it fell  on the floor.

ahum!

Mum flipped the pancake, but it fell on  the floor.

ahum!

Mum flipped the pancake, but it fell on  the floor and then it rolled through the door.

ahum, ahuuuurrrrm!

It rolled down the old well.

ahum!

It rolled down the old well.

ahum!

It rolled down the old well, then it started to smell.

ahum, ahuuuurrrm!

What is that coming out of the well?

It can’t be a pancake.

Is it a pancake?

It is a pancake!

Oh no……..

3 thoughts on “Paarrnkaaiiick!!!

  1. This is SUCH fun Louisa! I can hear you singing it! You have certainly put that imagination of yours to good use today!

  2. Hello Louis, I really like this – the structure of a poem with repeating lines works so well. Your title gives the reader a great clue as to how the poem will end but of course we don’t realise this until we have reached the end! Well done, keep writing!

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