The Daylight Robbery!! by Marcus

I went to the crime scene.Jack theme park.This place had been shut for years.Recently there had been a robbery this is where Jack used to keep his gold , but now he’s dead so anyone can steel his gold.The police were still on the chace to find the gold.I went to the mirror house I had a feeling someone was follwing me!I went in.Everything looked upside down.Then I saw a vase.It looked upside as well.Then I saw a shadow in the mirror it followed my every move.I couldn’t get away!Then it leaped out at me.I the strange figure whisperd to me “your life is doomed.”

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  1. Wow what an exciting entry for the 100wc Marcus! I love theme parks, and I think it was a great setting for your story. I want to know more about the strange figure! It was clever for you to leave your story on a cliffhanger leaving the reader wanting more, and I certainly would love to read more. Keep up the fantastic work 🙂

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