The haunted mystery?

Hurriedly,the vicious mermaid moved into it.The spooky house that was …  BANG!Who ever in their must of killed the horrifying mermaid because her blood as red as a juicy apple. Excited,Puzzled,Confused a family moved in,but suddenly the house moved on this island. The courageous family discovered that a colossal wave hit the house and then it moved it !!! Unfortunately the mum and dad got the house and died some how ? But was as fast as Lightning. It was only the little girl left in the house, she didn’t have a name. Mysteriously left in the dark gloomy house.Suddenly the pain in my arm … Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh help me!!! The end!

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  1. You made good effort at using descriptive words. Well done! You however need to connect the story well to make reading it more interesting.

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