The house of terror!!!!!!!!

A woman moved into a old house. She died did her spirit rome the house? We do not know! One day a new man which did not pleas the spirit. The man got in and the woman started to make the doors open then close. He did not get scared and as he walked up the stairs they creaked like a moan,the doors banged the curtains shook. He was not scared the woman wanted him to be scared like a wimp she hoped he would be running out screaming,she shut one of the doors BANG! He ran out screaming my arm the pain!!!

5 thoughts on “The house of terror!!!!!!!!

  1. Hi Ellen, What a scary house I don’t think I would have stayed in it that long would you! Perhaps you could proof read your work before publishing it next time as I think there is some thing missing at the beginning when you are talking about the “new man”. Please keep up the good work well done.

  2. Hi Ellen

    Well done I really liked this but I am so scared

  3. Hi Ellen

    Well done I really liked this but I am so scared ahhh!

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