100 word challenge by Amy6b

Silence , everything was still , as i crept down the snow deep street.

Worried, confused , amazed i stared in agony , no one would believe this sight i couldn’t believe my eyes!

startled , i looked down something had hit me on the head , a box? For me? The box was large and heavy with a perfectly tied bow on the top.

Just then i forgot about the amazing sight i looked up and , it was gone! Where did it go?

i wasn’t sure about opening the box , but i did. Shocked, i took a small, white card out of the large box…

One thought on “100 word challenge by Amy6b

  1. IM AMASED!!! i loved your description and i loved your punctuation WOW!!!EPIC!!!

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