100 word challenge…it looked upside down…

Heart pounding,I walked into the rusty old house.At that moment a old man came out of the shadows “beware” he said.I laughed at his warning.I creeped down the eerie corridor,I saw flies hovering over smelly dead rats.Suddenly I heard a loud scream.As I ran down the passageway it turned pitch black.The deafening silence scared me,at that moment I heard breathing behind me and felt icy fingers on my back.Quickly I span around, nothing just darkness.I heard another loud scream.I ran through the gloomy corridor. Ahh i screamed a skeleton.It looked upside down…

2 thoughts on “100 word challenge…it looked upside down…

  1. This was a very descriptive post! I think you had a great use of words! Overall, great job!

  2. Wow Alex! What a fantastic piece of writing… You set the scene brilliantly, using such great description, which really added drama and suspense to the story. A great entry! 🙂

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