100 Word Challenge – it looked upside down.

I ventured closer, unaware the danger that lurked around the statue, the statue, that could only move when it was looked at by a human being. I wondered closer… I heard a snap so I turned around and thought it was a fox, so I turned back round… I panicked as I saw the grim smile of the dreaded statue right at my petrified face and dared to think what will happen next…

Suddenly, I heard something approaching rapidly. I wondered what I should do because if I turned around the evil, monstrous statue would get me. A bat looked upside down at me.

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  1. Well done for entering the 100wc Sam ๐Ÿ™‚ You have used some fantastic vocabulary in your work, but i think that to improve it you need to check through it. For example in your first sentence you seem to have missed the word ‘of’ before ‘danger that lurked around the statue’. I wonder have you been watching Dr Who? Your story reminded me of one of the episodes ๐Ÿ™‚ I would love to find out what happens next. Keep up the great work!

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