100 WORD CHALLENGE…IT LOOKED UPSIDE DOWN…

It looked upside down, it looked unique, it looked fabulous. What was it? What could it possibly be? Where did it come from? Its different style stood out with most amazing with the horn blowing out steam and the cannon on top, it was truley unreal! My plan had finaly worked, after all theese years I couldn’t believe it! Lets get this thing rocking and rolling I thought to myself exitedly, but wait my brain stopped the exitment on my face blew away, what if it didn’t work? What if it did somthing bad? What if it blew up the city? I sat down cautiously…

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  1. Great work Jake. I really like the use of repeated questions. I think the fact that you gave your reader no description added to the mystery of what your object is. You can see it but you give no clues away.
    Well done.
    Mrs Prior – Team 100WC

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