Halloween horror by Hayden y6a

Suddenly the sky got darker as a mass of cloud seemed to devour the sky. A cold chill hung in the air as I stepped out on the wet, cobbled stone. Cautiously I sauntered towards the pine tree there I would be safe. Imagine a place where figures always loomed , where shadows engulfed the pathway , where the noises made me jump out of my skin ; that was where my fate had brought me. Out of the blue a twig snapped and the bushes ruffled. someone was watching me. As I stepped forward I felt cold breath rattling on my neck!

2 thoughts on “Halloween horror by Hayden y6a

  1. Please write on i absolutely loved it if only there was MORE to read!!

  2. That was really good Hayden I like your use of Imagine 3 examples!

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