In Year 6 literacy we have been improving the quality of our sentences. Today we used the ‘John Lewis Snowman’ advert as our inspiration. Here are some of our wonderful sentences!
The freezing snowman ventured around the mysterious, fascinating city.
I stared out the window at the tretorous, wintry snow.
Upsettingly, the next day the tall snowman had gone (leaving the snow-woman heartbroken).
Dejected, frozen, crippled with pain, the frail and unsteady snowlady nearly fell to the ground.
All he could see was snow as white as paper engulfing anything near it.
The snowman could taste the bitter snowflakes as he staggered along on his mission.
Terror surged through his body, but he maintained his balance on the mountain.
As he trudged along, the crisp, white snow crackled painfully under his feet.
Cautiously, the snowman (who was miles from home) went searching for a present.
As the snowman went on his amazing journey, the snow-woman felt downhearted and isolated in the freezing, bitter snow.
Tentatively, the snowman silently leapt onto the jagged rock, with clear blue water surrounding him.