The Gloomy Forest By Tom 100WC

The sky grew darker, I peered out of my window counting the cars driving past. That was when I saw the eerie shadow running through the misty woods, dodging trees. I knew something wasn’t right. Could it be the lost girl on the noticeboard just outside the park gates? Surely it couldn’t be, could it? The next day I thought about the shadowy figure running through the woods, I tried to think of a logical explanation as to what the dark shadow was. The following night it showed itself again leaping from a gnarled branch of an old oak tree.

2 thoughts on “The Gloomy Forest By Tom 100WC

  1. Very mysterious. Spotter is usually pretty good at getting to the bottom of mysteries but this one has me stumped.

    You have a wonderful way with words, Tom. Spotter’s tip: harness the power of the semicolon! It would look great separating “darker” and “I”. Spotter loves semicolons.

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